Thursday, October 27, 2016

Mao and Historical Fiction

            Before reading Balzac and the Little Chinese Seamstress, I did not know much about Mao and the Cultural Revolution.  In fact, all I had known about Mao was from a card game called “Mao” that my friends and I used to play, a variant of Uno in which the winner of each round gets to choose and enforce a secret rule for the next round which only he knows.  The name of this game is trying to get at the arbitrary nature of Mao’s rule, and the fact that he would constantly make up illogical rules without telling his people, and then punish citizens for unwittingly breaking those rules.
            Balzac and the Little Chinese Seamstress gave me insight into the truth of what it was like to grow up during the Cultural Revolution in China and to be a part of Mao’s reeducation initiative.  Not only have I learned about the hard work and suffering associated with reeducation in China, but also about it’s ironical aspects.  Mao wanted city kids to learn traditional ways and to separate them from modern culture, but in reality, his reeducation initiative ended up doing quite the opposite in many ways.  Though the children who were being reeducated were forced to do hard labor and experienced suffering, they were exposed to primitive traditions of the illiterate rural villagers – not the idealized version of traditionalism Mao had pictured.  Also, the city children brought much of their modern culture with them to the villages, spreading Western songs, ideas, and traditions among the rural people.  This was exactly the opposite of what Mao intended.

            Reading historical fiction gives me a window into the minds of realistic characters who experienced history.  Historical fiction authors describe how these characters think and feel, as well as giving important historical context.  On the other hand, a true historical account may teach me something about history, but would not give me the same level of vivid understanding about what it was really like to live in that time period.

Tuesday, October 11, 2016

First Quarter Reflections

I think I have started English II about the same place that I ended English I.  Last year, my main area of focus was learning how to effectively use textual evidence to support my thesis and use specific words from the thesis and the quotes throughout my analysis.  I think that I have been doing a pretty good job of this so far in English II.  One thing I need to work on is shortening my analysis.  Especially in in-class essays, my commentary tends to be lengthy and repetitive.  I need to learn how to use more concise but equally effective wording to get my points across.  Also, I would like to get faster at writing essays in class.  Often, in in-class essays, I have to consciously sacrifice the quality of my writing in order to complete the essay on time, which really annoys me, because I know I am a better writer than my repetitive essays may reflect.  These two goals go hand-in-hand, in that shortening my analysis will hopefully also shorten the amount of time it takes me to write my essays.

In my short story/poetry essay, I think I did a good job interweaving comparisons between the short story and the poem throughout my entire essay.  Also, I think I successfully connected my analysis back to my thesis.  One thing I definitely need to work on, which I mentioned before, is being less repetitive (Note the irony in that sentence… :D)  This leads to my goal for my next essay: shortening the length of my analysis sentences, lessening the amount of sentences needed to get my point across, and being less repetitive with my writing.